Reviews for Knight
Honeybri chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Nice twist on the traditional knight-dragon tale. The knight must really be feeling like a failure now.

It did feel a bit odd how your rhyme scheme changed around line 4 (going from axay to ybyc), although I don't know if you intended for that or not.

Also, the comma at the end of line 2 might do better as a period or colon (in my opinion). Everywhere else seems to be fine.


(This review counts for the December Review Marathon. For more information, you can go to the link in my profile)
R.C. Wulfe chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
how sad, :( and yet the words that made it so have all the right touches to make this grand... :) This was simply lovely.
pbj13 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
A nice twist on a popular plot. Good job.