|Reviews for Disturbed|
| Luna Henry chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
I like how you used a boggart as your insipiration and can turn it into your own story (I'm assuming this because I love Harry Potter and you said Ron's was a large spider, if I am wrong, sorry). I really love your description of George's feeling through his blinking and actions. I feel this is a great beginning to the story and only wish to read more.
| What Happens Now chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
I think this story was good, one thing I would change though is to reread it again. I think the grammar usage was a little off. Open-able for example you can replace with retractable, also spice George up a little give him some sort of habit that he does when he is scared something that makes him different. ALso I would add in a little piece of the event that happened, to introduce this meeting with the president, or you could have George going over the events in his head before this little conference.
| EDM chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
The ending was quite intriguing. I wonder what will happen next.