|Reviews for On the Making of Saints|
| Hawkfighter chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
omg I want to read more! this is awesome!
its a little confusing, but i guess thats just how I read things, but I'm sure I'll get it later.
gr why isn't there another page.. *trys clicking on where the 'next page' button is* *click click* *click click* Gr..
lol this is my first fave on this site. (its also the first story I've read so far..)
But I love it, and can't wait for more.
| The Wise Old Reviewer chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Wise Old Reviewer Say:
this is less of story so far, more introduction. I think that is intention so is OK, though remember basic rule to all writing: describe, dont tell.
very humorous and witty, i look to future chapters with exitement.