Reviews for On the Making of Saints
Hawkfighter chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
omg I want to read more! this is awesome!

its a little confusing, but i guess thats just how I read things, but I'm sure I'll get it later.

gr why isn't there another page.. *trys clicking on where the 'next page' button is* *click click* *click click* Gr..

lol this is my first fave on this site. (its also the first story I've read so far..)

But I love it, and can't wait for more.

Meanna Hawkfighter
The Wise Old Reviewer chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Wise Old Reviewer Say:

this is less of story so far, more introduction. I think that is intention so is OK, though remember basic rule to all writing: describe, dont tell.

very humorous and witty, i look to future chapters with exitement.