|Reviews for Children of the Wolf|
| Honeybri chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
What a sad story...poor Buck, clearly those villagers don't care how heartless or cruel they are (over a freaking cow, of all things). Although, I was a bit uncertain about his half-brother: was he a werewolf like his dad or a full wolf?
Another part I felt for Buck was when his dad was off his age by two years (the two lived together right?)
There were a few typos and errors:
-"My dad was one of those poeple..." people
-"...what I was that startled me!" I should be it, and I think the exclamation mark would work better as a period since the following sentences are also end in exclamation marks.
(This review counts for the December Review Marathon. For more information, you can go to the link in my profile)