I think about I died just laughing this and reading

umm... did i miss something? when do they get together?

Yes! I sequel would be wonderful!

Funny...creative...everything that makes this an awesome story. MAybe you should make this a multi-chapter story? If not, a sequel would be awesome

This story had me cracking up. Truly a good humor and romantic story.

That was fun! :)

I like how your write. Its easy to read, doesn't have anything superfluous and there's a kick of awesome to it :D

"It's some guy code. The wife is called The M because The Money is the root of all evil." - that is actually really really hilarious :D i've never heard of that before!

at first the cliche of clumsy girl abhorring high heels kind of put me off, but this might be promising :) will update as i read.

chocking choking*

I like the name of your operation and this idea :D (operation superman: save clark from louise)

It was humorous :) My favourite parts are when she screams "Dax is his lover!" and also her characterisation, how she ISN'T all lovey-dovey

so yes. i was looking for something short and sweet to read and i happened on this and it made me laugh. thank you :)

hmm its a bit too sudden. the ending. story has an interesting idea, but it needs more working on.

Just imagine if there was such an organisation, how COOL would that be? no more unwanted weddings ! LMAO.

BTW why only help grooms, and not the brides who get forced into the weddings ?

Anyways LOVE Dax, he sounds so gorgeous :) and ofcourse Ivy, she's awesome for coming up with such brilliant idea, although i have to give some credit to Zeus aswell.

The crashing the wedding part, and the bunny and bun story, was hilarious ! i still can't stop laughing :)

This was one of the hilarious OS i read, great job !

This is so awesome! There has to be a sequel about this, the wedding of Ivy & Dax and Clark & Rosalyn! And OMG, I loved the last part! SO SWEET.