Reviews for Clean Up On Aisle 7
Guest chapter 8 . 6/19
I really dislike all of Brady supposed friends and I hope he opens his eyes to there actions and dumps that guy..
Great chapter
Guest chapter 15 . 7/16/2015
Brady you slut. Go to Shaun! He's much better.
bryanareneea chapter 29 . 6/21/2015
Love love love love !
MalexisSwerve chapter 8 . 6/4/2015
I like Mary a million times more than I like Benji and Steph. She makes him feel better about himself than the other two. I swear, Brady needs more people like Jason and Mary in his life.
MalexisSwerve chapter 6 . 6/4/2015
1) Tim is obsessed with Doctor Who (and so are my friends; why me o;)
2) Tim is ALSO obsessed with The Hobbit (and so are my friends; therefore I reiterate, why me o;)
tyves986 chapter 30 . 4/13/2015
Well I have to be honest the last 2-3 chapters I kind of skimmed. Brady's absolute lack of backbone and childishness was really to much to handle. Even at the beginning I was aware how young he was. Though whenever I read these stories, I always hope they grow up before they F*** everything up. Well that wasn't the case here. I know Brady said he loves Shaun but I doubt it's the deep/long-lasting love. More like puppy love, or like love that you have in high school, that hurts just as much, but you know, that person is not your soul mate or anything.

It was surprising how much I identified with Mary's character. I went through something similar with one of my best friends. Except when I told that friend to grow up, she told me to "f off" and didn't speak to me for 3 years.

Well good read. Though the ending got a bit boring. I don't think it was the writing, it was more like Brady's character was getting annoying.
TLTH14 chapter 10 . 1/20/2015
Curse you for making a story so good that I haven't gone to sleep even though I start my semester in the next three hours.
ArthurAlbionKirkland chapter 30 . 6/2/2014
Oh my goooooood what have you DONE TO ME.
I am a certified mess right now. This is... this is wonderful. The CHARACTER DEVELPOMENT was so beautifully done, and putting a cheating story from the point of view of a cheater...
This is like nothing I've ever read before.
All the stories I've ever read with cheating involved the cheater as a fuckface who couldn't be a decent person if their life depended on it. I like how you showed Brady's side, rather than Shaun's or Jason's, in this. It makes it more real and drives home how we are all human and we all make mistakes and we all learn from them but sometimes we just need to grow the hell up. I just.
I love you.
ArthurAlbionKirkland chapter 2 . 6/1/2014
ho shit
shit's gonna go DOWN
Mandy S. Bryan chapter 30 . 4/28/2014
Just realized that I have read several of your stories and enjoyed them all. You're a really great writer and your stories unique and complex. Just finished reading this ones and I thought it was great. Gonna start the sequel and I hope it gives some more insight to Brady's story.
LesBeatles chapter 30 . 4/27/2014
This is great! I love how your stories have a psychologically consistent /twist/ to them.

We learn a lot of things from our parents subconsciously - such as how to parent our own children in the future and, in Brady's case, how relationships are "supposed" to go.

It's one of those things that's never said, but is subconsciously picked up, and I love how, in the end, Brady realizes exactly what the issue is. Like... he realized the real reason WHY he acted the way he did in his relationship(s).

Bubblegum370 chapter 30 . 2/27/2014
This story was really great. It's hard to find the words to describe this. I hope you don't find this insulting, but I felt like I was reading a novel that a teacher might force on someone. It wasn't that I had to force myself to read it at all. The story was just like a lot of classical literature that shows something so human that it becomes hard to stop reading because part of you wants to see the main character get everything they want, but you know they don't deserve it.

The ending, although bittersweet, was realistic and not cliche in the slightest. The best part is I can take something away from this. I've been cheated on in the past and have been strongly against it ever since, but somehow I felt sympathy Brady. It takes amazing writing to sway a person's mind. I just want to compliment you on how nice the flow was and how great the character development was. I don't usually make reviews this long, but I thought that this story really deserved it.

This was an awesome story! Thanks for posting it!
Winged Demoness chapter 30 . 11/3/2013
I've never read a story that has left me feeling so satisfied. Everything was so perfect and real and honest and amazing and why isn't every story like this? With actual characters with actual feelings and actual problems and actual ACTUALNESS. I love everything!
Raymond chapter 26 . 3/18/2013
Hey, I just wanted to compliment your story before I actually finish it (because if I don't say what I mean to say now, I might forget later). I love the story so far and the depth you put into Brady. On one end, I'm cursing him out for being the master of indecision, but I kind of have to give it to him for the shit he's going through at home. And this love triangle is haunting all my thoughts, I MUST find out who he ends up with (if any/either of them). I loved the story and I can't wait to read the ending! :) Cheers
MagnificentFern chapter 30 . 11/26/2012
I loved your fiction, really loved, and I CANT wait for the sequel if there is one. I am really hoping that Brady will get better. I went through the parents stuff, and also sort of got away as a result, but things only got worse. I hope it is not the case for this fiction ! I am really sad there is no really happy ending but it's life I guess :) And again if there is a sequel coming for this fiction I would kill to be able to read it. Maybe not kill, that is a bit extreme, but I hope you get the point. In the meantime I will proceed to check your other fictions. cheers 3
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