|Reviews for Pick Me Up|
| Wanda Walker chapter 15 . 3/31/2011
Well, I have yet to be completely sold on the pregnancy issue, but I had to remind myself that these guys are 28, which made it a lot more okay for me. XD I believe twenty-eight-year-old women are far more capable of making mature decisions regarding children than, say, sixteen-year-olds. They also have stable jobs, etc. that will make being a single mom far easier (if she doesn't give it up for adoption, of course). I look forward to seeing how you handle the issue. ;)
Oh Grayson. Why do I feel like you're going to make things worse before you make them better? XD
Looking forward to the next installment. :3
| Divanora chapter 15 . 3/31/2011
Whoo, big chapter. And next the 'talk' Very curious to see what Grayson has to say.
Poor Melissa though - she needs to find a nice guy (or girl!) to help raise the little one.
| artemisia90 chapter 15 . 3/31/2011
so i really like Craig i think he should be happy for once ! Paul is just plain asshole and Elise clearly a bitch(no offence to anyone that have/like open relationships)...thankfully that leaves the road open for Grayson!
| doublestandard chapter 15 . 3/31/2011
I'm really enjoying this story! I'm so glad I read it.
Oh, god. Melissa is pregnant? Hahahaha wow.
Ugh! Craig and Greyson need to figure things out!
Keep up the good work! :D
| Midnights Scream chapter 12 . 3/28/2011
Awh. Poor Craig and losing out with Paul. I'm not sure I feel about Grayson. I feel like I should like him more than I do. great job though and looking forward to reading more soon!
| Wanda Walker chapter 14 . 3/28/2011
As we all know, SEX SOLVES EVERYTHING,
At least, that's what fangirls like to think. :3
I loved the awkward brother talk. Aha . . . men.
| lost in pale blue chapter 14 . 3/28/2011
On the one hand, I'm so glad that Grayson finally grew a pair and made a move. On the other hand, this probably will cause a boatload more issues.
| Poptart Guava King chapter 14 . 3/28/2011
LOL GET ON THAT, CRAIG. xD
But um. yea. woah update. I'm gonna have to re-read from ch1 to remember stuffs. D: maybe i shouldn't follow like 50 fics at once. i forget which story is which.
| XxX.paperchild.XxX chapter 13 . 3/27/2011
Yeah he was most defiantly cheated there at the end, but again I really like how you have written this and Melissa really just needs to spill because I am dying to know what's she's hiding and I really want Grayson and him to get together so bad can't wait till your next update
| lost in pale blue chapter 13 . 3/27/2011
Poor Craig. I think I'd be crazy by now with all of the mixed signals that Grayson is sending.
| prrina chapter 10 . 3/27/2011
(: love this story.
I'm really loving Grayson at the moment (: he's acting like an adorable kicked puppy :P
I really would like to hear a bit more about Craig's exes (: Hint, hint...
Update soonish please (: xx
| Divanora chapter 13 . 3/27/2011
Le gasp! She's pregnant isn't she? And poor Grayson, he's definitely suffering from a major case of denial. Or maybe not so much anymore...?
And I vote no on the schedule - I like these quick updates!
For stuff to read - I check out people who alert/fave review's favorites (& then those people's favorites, & so on)
| greyes chapter 12 . 3/26/2011
This is great so far! Can't wait for more...
| XxX.paperchild.XxX chapter 12 . 3/25/2011
wow this is really good and i can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon :D
| TheGirlBehindTheGlasses chapter 12 . 3/25/2011
Ah, drama. Oh, how I love the drama. Hahaha. Anyways, great story; I can't wait for you to write more! I had been up until the wee hours of the morning the other night just catching up to the most recent chapter, so that says a lot. I send you my encouragements! Keep writing!