Guess not...

Does this have a happy ending?

This was a super amazing story! Why hadn't I read it before? It made me feel all the feelings, and during the times Juniper was sick and weak and asthmatic, it was portrayed so well that I myself felt sick in my stomach and nauseated. And you gave a completely delicious and unexpected twist at the end. Loved it. You have a great talent. I hope you keep indulging us with more of your work!

I find Liam and Juniper cute together. But to be honest, I'm probably kinda, sorta hoping Juniper will end up with Oliver. In fact, I've been probably kinda, sorta shipping them since the beginning (I'm glad Oliver ended up being the dude from the first chapter).

I can't wait until it gets all dark because it seems like such a fluffy story. I'm really liking how you're building this up, though. I'm not even that impatient to get to the part where the story really gets going since it's already great.

There are some typos I noticed, but it's stuff like "your" vs "you're" as well as "it's" vs "its" (although I noticed this once). Totally minor. I like your writing style.
(I'm not sure if you'll read this since the story is now complete)

T_T UGH! I DONT KNOW HOW TO FEEL! IM GLAD SHE'S OUT OF THAT SITUATION AND MOVING ON, BUT I LOVE THOSE BOYS, EVEN THOUGH THEIR BOTH PSYCHOTIC! THIS STORY WAS SO GOOOD! Dang it, its 3:00 in the morning, so its gonna be awhile before I fully process that its over T_T

No no no Oliver, Oli no!

NOOOOOO OLIVER NOOOOOO! WHY!

Ugh that would of been the perfect time for Oliver's father to come home, to find Liam on his property and kick his ***. Liam needs to stop, I keep feeling sorry for him then switching to hating him. Good for Rooney that she's happy and not involved in all of this, though sometimes I wish she would find out what her old friend is going through, so they could be friends again. Dangit Liam! I've got so much love and hate for him!

You just crossed the mother freaking line Liam. My baby Oliver was the last straw.

NOOOOOO! NOT MY OLIVER! I was giving Liam the benefit of the doubt, since he wasn't being as cruel, but now he's crossing the line! Juniper! The line stops at Oliver!

Ugh I wanted Oliver to kick his *** and save his woman! I'm gonna need the old Juniper who I said was kind of *****y to come back! And where is Rooney! At the least I hope she's making progress with Adam in her absence. Man even I fell for Liam in the beginning, now I just want to throttle him!

Okay Juniper that was straight cold, treating Rooney like that, I almost don't feel bad for her when with what Liam is planning.

So this is very interesting so far, I can't wait to see how it turns dark. I'm not sure how I feel about juniper, she can be sweet sometimes, and a little bit of a ***** sometimes too, and she's definitley giving creepy vibes when it comes to Liam, basically an obsession. And Oliver, can't wait to see more of him, he seems like he can be violent, but at the same time he's kind of adorable, which is really weird when I picture him emo like lol. Ah Rooney, I know this story is gonna be dark, but I hope her and Adam end up together, her parents are really overprotective, but in this day and age can ya blame them?, still I hope they get together soon. All in all you seem to have very well developed characters, I like characters with layers ya know and you definitely got that down!

This story was just.. Wow.. I don't usually read stories that get so dark cause I get super frustrated, but I couldn't stop and not read it.. I got addicted to it right away. Both Liam and Oliver grew on me very much no matter what they both did to her, and I still wanted that she'd end up with one of them. Both of them were broken-especially Oliver, and I wanted her to fix that so bad! But I usually cheer for the first person to be involved with the other, so Liam was the one I wanted her to end up with. But even though she didn't, I felt like she did get closure anyway and that she started moving on, so I was happy with the ending nevertheless. Gonna miss reading this!