Reviews for The Perfect Match |
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![]() ![]() I would really like to read this story, I added you on loveyournal. my username there is ess_alma ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A treasure worth remembering. This is a trophy sitting on a manicured shelf. It is marvelously composed with everything to make a splendid piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this first chapter I hope you finish this story :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow is all I have to say! You have me hooked girl! So hopefully I get to continue it on LV ( silviaoh) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I just read this short story and I really want to read the rest of it. I added myself to your community in LJ (zainabzkhan). Hope to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() ...and I just saw that at the top of this, it says that the full story is no longer on this site. :( I can't find it on your livejournal. I don't speak livejournal, so if it is there, my hope of finding it is slim. Sad day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I love this! I like Jasmeen. I can't wait to read more! Please update soon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, can't find you on lj and I can't comment on the same chapter twice. Can you post a link or something. Also, just fyi, I was actually rereading some of your old stories today before your post. Love love MacLean. Didn't you say you would revisit those characters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sure as well enjoyed it. I keep on wondering why there's just a few who have read this. Or that maybe some just didn't bother to write a comment. I was just in the right mood when I read this that I got caught up in your story. I can't help but laugh at the matchmaking of the family. You have got some funny lines here. And for it being quick was just right for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, hell... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best Christmas present ever! The story was wonderfully written and I can't wait for the other stories you're planning with the cousins. I think you need to send this in and try to get it published. Maybe in a short story magazine? Your pacing and characterization was perfect. That scene with the penlight is just SO GOOD and my favourite part of the story. Actually I have many favourites. I also loved your whole prologue or intro. You built the narrative beautifully. Your dialogue is hilarious and spot on. I can't get over how good you are. I'm so glad I'm your friend right now, because when you get published, I get to read your books before everyone else! |
![]() ![]() hehee, happy ending! ;) I really liked this story, it was cute. I love your characters. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're back! I'm so glad! This was great, short and sweet and fun! I love Aneil's speech, so intense and surprising and wonderful! I hope you continue and don't disappear again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() they dated for a month n they got married... tat is fast... |
![]() ![]() ![]() "cute" seems to be way too mild a word for this. I loved the scene in the other chapter when she was yelling at her cousins. FAMILY LOVE |