Reviews for Again
Rhocar chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Loved it, the emotions were racing through my body as I imagined the scene, just one little adjustment could be made the last line let the piece down, maybe a tiny bit of rewording, but even as I am writing this I am still tingling with the emotion of the scene you portrayed, a similar one that I have lived through. Congratulations on a great piece, hope you have more.