Reviews for The Evolution of a Wallflower |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehehe, love it. JM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter :) Short, but good. I like the end, and I'm looking forward to reading a lot more! :) Don't leave me hangin'! D: Haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry 2 review again, but I made a mistake the last review I send you...its suppose to say please update as soon as possible, not review...again sorry...oh and great story by the way... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story so far! Please review as soon as possible:] |
![]() ![]() ![]() clify! make your chapters longer! :D i love it! update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You switch viewpoints very well so on that note: congrats. :) I also really liked the characters, especially Alex. The summary reminded me of a wallflower character I am in the process of writing so I clicked on it and was happy to find a sweet story. I have high hopes for the Christmas dance. Want to know how this story will develop and how this 'wallflower' will evolve. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so cute! Update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! It's so cute! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good chapter. I like how you're switching POVs. No spelling or grammar errors that I noticed. It looks like you've developed your characters nicely, so far :) Keep up the work; I'm looking forward to reading Chapter 4 :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds good so far, but one grammar thing: every time a different character says something, it's a new paragraph. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I'm such a dumar (no idea how to spell it, I just say it xD duummar? doo-mah? Idk), the first chapter said that her and Sophie were friends, and there I was wondering why they were talking. Damn my memory! There I was thinking that Jayden is being all sweet liking how she blushes, noticing her eyes and all that when he goes on about her butt. Tsk tsk. At least it made me laugh a little. d; Another good chapter. And yes, I have a habit of saying something along these lines when I review and am not sure what else to say. Anyway. Have a happy new year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another good chapter. I can't wait until they meet again, lol. But then I'm kind of curious about what she was talking to that cheerleader for. A strange thing to wonder about, but whatever. xD Adn school lunches ARE horrible. Each time they ask us in a survey what could be better about the school, I say lunches lunches lunches. They just ignore it and I think they actually get worse... Haha, can't wait for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story.I'm sure they're gonna be a good couple!Do continue I'm excited on what comes next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so short! but i love still loved it! :D |