Reviews for Convulsions
MadameGiry25 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
That was terribly sad. I'd definately be interested in learning more about this story.
11's-SevenofHearts chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
That was terrible. Of course, I mean that in a good way. The horror of the situation was powerful.
marceline the vampire queen chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Very well written and disturbing, a few typos but not too many. This is an insighful story that is unnervingly honest in places, and quite intriguing. Good luck with the novel.
reginavictoria chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
It is "effective" precisely because you put the truth out there as it is, unvarnished. The way you depict suffering is real. Too real for most people, I think, who would be apt to dismiss it as "melodramatic" all because they don't want to dwell on and accept the fact that such suffering is real and possible.