Reviews for Snowfall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Grate story I loved it especially the ending it was so lovely but so heart rencher sad |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww this was really good :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not. Bad. At. All. You know, most endings like this make me sad and all, but this one fit so well with the story that... I honestly started crying. I know, big baby over here. This last chapter was really well done! So sad, yet so amazingly grabbing and heart wrenching! This story had the perfect love tangle woven together to perfection. I love this, because I appreciate perfection. Thanks for the great story! PS. Sorry I didn't write you back in the PM. My internet was down and just popped back up now. I don't think there was much more needed said then there was :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so sad... I don't want her to get together with Caleb anymore! Damien is so much cuter! You did a very good job writing this, even though it was sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the update and in my opinion i taught it was sad :) abd nooooooo the end is near |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the update now you MUST UPDATE SOON OR I WILL BE FORCED TO SEND NINJA KITTENS AFTER YOU TO MAKE YOU |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! You end it there? This chapter is soo perfect...and then thats the end! UGH! I like Damien, he is cute and crazy and...I like him. Screw whats his face! I'm in love with Damien! |
![]() ![]() hey it's me! I read every single chapter I think this is pretty good I laughed I almost cried and I got to say my emotions took over. This is really good I want to read the next chapter because you don't really know the characters and I want to find out more not like my story where you already know what the characters are like before you start reading. But then again that's fanfiction for ya. Anyway I should start writing the sequeal of Jail Bait...I haven't started...YIKES! Thank god tomorrow will be rainy here that'll keep me in the house. Can't wait for the next chapter _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the update liked it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm! I can't wait to see what happens! EEPP! I'm some what confused though, about a few things. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. so Caleb have some sort of nerve disorder? I'm more worried about Alina; I don't think she's going to be able to cope with it if something bad happens to him. You've done Caleb's character with care and a lot of work, I'm sure, and it shows! Nice job. x mandy ~review marathon, link in my profile! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh-oh. What an ending! I liked it, yet I felt you could do a better job with it. Yes, it's a bad thing for Alina seeing as she was hoping to be closer to Caleb, but isn't she the one who said she didn't want a romantic relationship, at least not yet?. I don't think she can blame him... Still, I'd like to see what sort of twist this brings. I'm really curious about Damien, though. He seems to be pretty moody all the time, and suddenly he's jealous of Caleb! I sense a love quadrilateral here! x mandy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how Alina isn't able to make up her mind about whether she want to be friends with Caleb or not. It makes this more realistic, as she didn't immediately take him back. Nevertheless, I'm glad she realized that she can't be alone all her life, she needs Caleb! (: Great chapter. x mandy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the only problem I have with this is that big block of text in the beginning. For a once-over, I was tempted to skim (don't worry, of course I didn't!) so I think you should maybe break that into two or even three paragraphs. I wonder why Caleb didn't recognize her! I feel horrible for Alina. For all those emotions to be coming back now, she can't be feeling great. You did an awesome job with this chapter and with Alina's feelings, especially when she first sees Caleb. (: x mandy |