| Reviews for Snowfall |
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   thefaultinourpatronus chapter 4 . 3/18/2011 HE'S BACK! Yes yes yes. I was hoping for that. Alina's emotions are described nicely during that class. I wonder if anything's happening between her and Damien, and it's well done how you've slowly established their relationship. x mandy ~review marathon, link in my profile |
| thefaultinourpatronus chapter 3 . 3/15/2011 One Week Later -That's the only thing I think you could change. Why not just fit that into narration? It looks much more professional, right? Because her father. -I think you meant because OF her father? Horrible for Alina, can't believe she has to go through that. On one hand her father seems to care about her, he seems concerned enough about her cutting. But then... he tried to rape her. He hits her. That's not fatherly behavior... I wish Caleb would come back! x mandy |
| thefaultinourpatronus chapter 2 . 3/15/2011 Wow, what a change. What happened to that sweet girl from the last chapter? Interesting transition, I definitely want to know what changed! x mandy |
| thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 Cute chapter! I think it's a nice start, to show them as kids. Not a unique idea as such but you did it really well! The emotions of the two kids were to the T; perfect! One second they're sad, the next happy. Great job! x mandy |
| Luv1997bird chapter 12 . 3/13/2011 great. |
| Pain1415 chapter 12 . 3/9/2011 Caleb is so sweet ) update soon plz |
| I-am-happy chapter 12 . 3/8/2011 Oh yes! UPDATE I am lovin' it! |
| Saw is sad chapter 12 . 3/8/2011 thanks for the update :D loved it, like Caleb's parents there cool |
| I-am-happy chapter 11 . 3/7/2011 I did so much enjoy this chapter! In a few spots I would change the wording a little so it flowed a little better, but you did very well! I shall now be looking forward to the next chapter! Whats going to happen next? What? What? What? Now update so I may see! Please! Or please amazing writer! Spare me the waiting a long time and update! I shall be really uber happy if you do! :) Please :) Update fast! I-am-happy PS. I'm hooked. |
| Saw is sad chapter 11 . 3/5/2011 thanks 4 the chapter loved it :D |
| Luv1997bird chapter 11 . 3/5/2011 Love it and can't wait until the nest chapters come out about caleb. Yeah. |
| I-am-happy chapter 10 . 2/22/2011 I liked it. Not as great as some of your other chapters, but thats okay. Looking for more soon! Meaning UPDATE! ;) |
| Saw is sad chapter 10 . 2/21/2011 thanks 4 the fast update this chapter was surprising i loved it :) have a nice day |
| AlexsandraGabriel chapter 9 . 2/20/2011 Aww this chapter.. soo cute |
| Saw is sad chapter 9 . 2/19/2011 thanks 4 the update loved the last part :) |