Oh I liked it! I liked it a lot! Very good kissing scene too, I think it was very well done! So congrats! I really liked this chapter and am dieing for the next one already! So come on girl! Be really fast so I can be super duper really amazingly 100%ly hhaappyy! *Oh yeah, double letters* ;)

So be fast please! I'm getting addicted to this story!

Love,

1-am-happy.

Listen to Ms. Nelson, show not tell. There's a lot of telling here and it'd be better if you went through and were more descriptive.

Other than that good job. :)

-Cecilie

Wacky! Oh wow I did like this chapter. Seemed really slow and too short for my liking but thats okay. Update soon!

thanks 4 the chapter it made my day :) loved it

Argh! Noope! I don't want there to be a Victoria!

Good chapter though! Looking forward for more.

thanks 4 the chapter really liked it :D

thanks 4 the update really enjoyed reading it :D

Hm I liked it :) Update soon?

She's very inconsistent in this chapter. She changes her mind multiple times talking to Caleb, so you need to either express the turmoil more blatantly or make her more stubborn.

You're still using too many words. :)

Other than that, I like it. :)

-Cecilie

Ohmygosh Ohmygosh such a good chapter cant wait for the next please hurry! I can tell this is going to be a good story:)

Oh yeah, oh yeah! He knows, he knows! :) Nice chapter but The cliffy made me sad! I oh so very wish you would update soon! Great chapter though and amazing writing! *Thumbs up!*

Wahoo anyway please update faster this time? Please, oh please! I'll give you a high five!

Thanks a bunch!

~XHappy WritingX ~I-am-happy~

really liked that chapter thanks a lot and have a happy new year :)

OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG. D; CLIFFHANGER! WHY. PLEASE HURRY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER OMG CAN'T WAIT ;D

Hi, this is kinda sad :/ But Ihope he will remember her! *Cross my fingers* Good writing there are thigns here and there that need worked on but over all good :)

Hope to read more soon.

XHappy WritingX ~I-am-happy.

Proofread.

It's good, but melodramatic. The being locked in her room for a week is improbable and overdone. Plus you'd think she'd stash more food than a thing of water if she knew it was coming.

-Cecilie