|Reviews for Sleeping on the Moon|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
"- A dream? Over the hedge? –"... the over the hedge part seemed forced for the rhyme. It didn't really make sense to me.
"hiding from the winds' sigh."... I think wind is singular so it would be wind's
I liked the piece. I agree it is very peaceful. It's a cute idea and you described it well. I kinda wished by the ened of the piece that I could be up there with you.
By the way thanks for your review on my piece!
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| Tapioca-Robot chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Very cute and warming adventure. Rather inspires me to wish for the same. Makes me think of Space-man Stu from the Mcdonalds commercial. That might be an unflattering comparison to you, but I find it quite fanciful. Good work.