loved it soo much :)

I loved the story buy I think their parents should've been told what Micheal had done to Julienne before falling for her.

Then we'd see if Julienne's mother still likes him. He's quite crafty. Telling only part of his story and getting everyone on his side. It seems unfair this way.

Your story is awesome! I think i am in love with Michael!

It was like watching a car crash slowly unfold before my eyes. I knew I shouldn't enjoy but it was hypnotic in a way that I could not tear my eyes away from it. Many aghast and horrifying moments but it was eerily entertaining :)

Twisted, not in a bad way though. I've actually read this story before but rereading it, it's not bad. I'm attracted to dark, twisted plots sometime and this story certainly fit the bill :))) nicely written. Also the chemistry between Michael and Julie was spellbinding although the circumstances that brought them together was certainly perverse, it worked.

My situation wasn't as hardcore as Julienne's, i never physically mutilated myself due to fear and religious belief, but it was close enough. This is probably the first piece of literary work that had me balling basically. The format needs to be polished a bit, but furthermore, I think you should be proud of what you wrote. I'm not done reading it, but I all for TEAM NICK.

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it :)

I'm sorry, but this story is bullshit. I wasted time trying to read through this and hoping it'd get better, but when I decided to look at the last chapter, I was like, Fuck it.

Honestly, a girl tormented getting with her tormenter, I can take, but your presentation - or how you did your story - just was bad. It just felt rushed. Everything did. I'd rather I'd gotten a sense of the torment pre-first suicidal attempt before you open up the chapter with her suicide attempt because you didn't give me any opening to invest myself in the characters. And though the deaths of her dad and her cousins was a huge factor in the story, you didn't really say anything about the dad to make me also feel sorrow for his death.

I was severely disappointed in this story because I know you could have done better with this kind of theme.

Okay, it's official. I'm rooting for Nick!

loved this story.

Okay, I just wanted to say this story was absolutely beautiful. The second I heard there was going to be a spin off for Nick, my first thought was Shane. I'm going to check now and see if I'm right. By the way, you're birthday is a day after mine and I got a kick out of that. Thank you for allowing me to enjoy this piece of writing. I enjoyed it!

You're an amazing writer I loved your stories

This so far is my favorite

:)

awesome, I shall be waiting for the next story! :)

Awww the ending! It was cute, and I love how inseperable julienne and michael are. The whole story was great and I'm going to miss the updates.

Nick's spin-off will fill the void :)

A story well done You completely nailed it great job!