Lize-LOVED IT, GREAT chapter! I think you are doing a most MARVELOUS JOB with it and believe me I do understand what you are talking about! When I started my story I was new to writing this kind of thing, I had always written poetry or little plays I would gather kids to put on. I have grown also and now trying to think if should just rewrite the whole story or just continue on with the way I write now-I haven't been able to read let alone try to write in some time-I feel terrible about that!

I just love love love stories like these! 3 I am shipping Nola and Orin so much right now I swear in my mind they are a beautiful pair
Ugh Atra is such a... Hmph.
Hahaha I am thinking that the marriage will not push through because Orin and Nola will be together and Cale and Rose can be together hehehe
LET ATRA DIEEE (or plot twist, she ends up with Derek, which will never happen)

Aw, thanks for the heads up, I hope to see your writing soon again!

WOW Lize-I DIED LAUGHING when Herb hit him over the head with a frying pan-that was PURE PERFECTION! It seemed like every little touch from Nora sent Orin into excruciating pain! I DID NOT SEE THIS ONE COMING but I had been wondering when Atra would make an appearance and it would figure it would be with Cale! I REALLY REALLY will be BOUNCING ALL OVER for the next update to see what you will come up with next-ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT GIRL!

Completely understandable! GREAT CHAPTER! I want to kick Nola's father tho!

just so you know i'm not mad at you taking so long, but killing off Orin is just wrong

OMG OMG OMG-THIS WAS SOOOOOOOO INTENSE! I knew Orin would come to the rescue and now he is hurt again and BLOODY HELL-another cliffie-great job at grabbing our attention and leaving us wanting more! Now I remember who Atra is-DUH! LOL! She is the one who cursed him for eventually rejecting him! I will DEFINITELY BE WATCHING FOR MORE when you get the opportunity! You have again done a BRILLIANT AND MOST EXCEPTIONAL JOB HERE!

OMG Lize-Orin really made a mess (AGAIN) and needs a boot up his a**! Now I want to know what is going on with Atra and what her plans are? Poor Rose but LOVED the way she FOUGHT them. Neither Nola nor Orin really want to admit their attraction and actual feelings for one another! This you my FRIEND-WAS BEAUTIFUL AND A BIT SUSPENSEFUL-NOW I AM ON TO THE NEXT CHAPPIE-YAY!

CLIFF HANGERS
Y U SO GOOD AT THEM
Yeah that was a very blunt way of saying, wow. You are excellent at cliff hangers. I am excited for the next update :D. Good luck with school!

Ok Lize-WOW-WOW-what an AMAZING CHAPTER as usual! One: I LOVED Erica and Herb's DECEPTION-that was BLOODY BRILLIANT! Two: I really really LOVE Orin and Nola together BUT Cale is so sweet too and would like to see him with Rose! BUT NOW I am WONDERING what is going on with her and why did she drug him? It is crazy but I HAVE BECOME LOST IN THIS STORY and you have done SUCH AN EXCEPTIONAL job with the writing of it-I will definitely be waiting for another update!

So many twists. Your writing gets better and better with each chapter :D You're so amazing. I never saw Rose drugging Cale coming. And the ENDING. You're fantastic. :D

Awwwww that was cute. I liked it. I am rather bummed that there are no more lol xD I'm going to stay updated a bit better from now on xD I missed reading your stuff.
Gotta admit I feel kinda bad for cale though. Just because the relationship breaking isn't really his fault. Although, he should have married her years ago since they have been engaged so long lol xD that perhaps was his greatest mistake.
Can't wait for more!
Xoxox

I like the budding friendship. It works(: not too rushed, not too delayed. I do hope things work out for cale though :)
I kinda like her dad a little less but I realize why he did that. Good motivation for him. It fits (:

Awww no :( I'm so sorry to hear about your cat :(love ya.
Also, I am very curious about orin and atra's past now xD

The flour fight. Yessssss. I loved that.
You are making my day at work so fun with this story :D I love it.