|Reviews for The big, bad book of terrible fantasy writing|
| Anihyr Moonstar chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
But...Raven IS an extremely overused, stereotypical fantasy name. I've lost count of how many times I've seen someone use the name Raven and think it's "totally cool". I thought you were using it as a "poke fun at stereotypes" name, not as a serious character. Ah well. Just figured I'd point that out.
Also, most of these things can be found in Rinkworks Fantasy Novelist's Exam. If you've never heard of it, just google it; it's pretty amusing.
| AlwaysForeverDreamer chapter 38 . 2/19/2012
This looks like it was really fun to write.
| Soot chapter 36 . 1/3/2012
Hey. Although I'm not the type to enjoy massacre, I had fun reading your poke at all things cliche. For your chapter, The Good Guys Always Win, the way you phrased the last paragraph made me think of Hamlet. No one wins...
Also, I'd recommend a book to you with two kinds of villains, one devilishly clever and the other entirely despicable, called "The Hidden Hand" or "Capitola the Madcap" by E.D.E.N Southworth. It's a tad slow at first, but I think you may like it.
| Jay W. Ce chapter 38 . 5/29/2011
Oh...Is it really the end? I came to like Blue. I don't think he's an anti-Sue. I really like this story. It's the 2nd I've read on I like Raven too I just wish you'd write more stories with them...This is one of the best things I've every read...I really like this...
| No Account chapter 38 . 4/13/2011
I love this story and I love Blue and Raven! Sad it's complete but I will always love it, thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this. _
| S. J. Vanne chapter 38 . 4/12/2011
So sad to see this story end :(. It was wonderfully entertaining. I enjoyed it tremendously :D.
| Fakety Mcfakename chapter 37 . 4/12/2011
I'm going to miss this story.
ROUND OF APLAUSE!
| Fakety Mcfakename chapter 36 . 4/12/2011
i love the layers in this, the cliche killing on top, raven's psychology below, and the setting on the bottom. don't neglect the setting, even though it isnt' necassary, feel free to add in some description, like "the emerald wyvern was watching tentavily, hoping for a distraction."
| Fakety Mcfakename chapter 34 . 4/2/2011
i'm not sure is starwars made that cliche, or something else.
| Fakety Mcfakename chapter 35 . 4/2/2011
so, the friction between the two grows...
| Fakety Mcfakename chapter 33 . 3/20/2011
oh, poor dwagon. he's been abused my those jerkish heros.
| Loser chapter 31 . 3/18/2011
"Do you, my loyal readers, think Blue is an anti-Sue?"
Impossible to say since this story doesn't reveal too much about Blue. And he doesn't seem to be followed by bad luck. If he really enjoys killing people, then, on the contrary, he's having a wonderful time and cannot be called an anti-sue.
| Fakety Mcfakename chapter 31 . 3/17/2011
so, what's the mary sue test? and, did blue really go preppy for a moment, or was he kidding?
| Angel Investor chapter 29 . 3/12/2011
True. Minions are usually just worthless losers, incapable of causing any serious harm to the hero or his companions.
| d chapter 30 . 3/11/2011
hehehe. watch it be answered "hey, are you the guy with the video game delivery?" "um. yes." oh, come on in. set it on the coffee table. sorry for teh blood and gore, i killed my interior decroatier for it, literally!"