But...Raven IS an extremely overused, stereotypical fantasy name. I've lost count of how many times I've seen someone use the name Raven and think it's "totally cool". I thought you were using it as a "poke fun at stereotypes" name, not as a serious character. Ah well. Just figured I'd point that out.

Also, most of these things can be found in Rinkworks Fantasy Novelist's Exam. If you've never heard of it, just google it; it's pretty amusing.

- Moonstar

This looks like it was really fun to write.

Hey. Although I'm not the type to enjoy massacre, I had fun reading your poke at all things cliche. For your chapter, The Good Guys Always Win, the way you phrased the last paragraph made me think of Hamlet. No one wins...

Also, I'd recommend a book to you with two kinds of villains, one devilishly clever and the other entirely despicable, called "The Hidden Hand" or "Capitola the Madcap" by E.D.E.N Southworth. It's a tad slow at first, but I think you may like it.

Oh...Is it really the end? I came to like Blue. I don't think he's an anti-Sue. I really like this story. It's the 2nd I've read on I like Raven too I just wish you'd write more stories with them...This is one of the best things I've every read...I really like this...

I love this story and I love Blue and Raven! Sad it's complete but I will always love it, thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this. _

So sad to see this story end :(. It was wonderfully entertaining. I enjoyed it tremendously :D.

I'm going to miss this story.

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GOOD WORK!

i love the layers in this, the cliche killing on top, raven's psychology below, and the setting on the bottom. don't neglect the setting, even though it isnt' necassary, feel free to add in some description, like "the emerald wyvern was watching tentavily, hoping for a distraction."

i'm not sure is starwars made that cliche, or something else.

so, the friction between the two grows...

oh, poor dwagon. he's been abused my those jerkish heros.

"Do you, my loyal readers, think Blue is an anti-Sue?"

Impossible to say since this story doesn't reveal too much about Blue. And he doesn't seem to be followed by bad luck. If he really enjoys killing people, then, on the contrary, he's having a wonderful time and cannot be called an anti-sue.

so, what's the mary sue test? and, did blue really go preppy for a moment, or was he kidding?

True. Minions are usually just worthless losers, incapable of causing any serious harm to the hero or his companions.

hehehe. watch it be answered "hey, are you the guy with the video game delivery?" "um. yes." oh, come on in. set it on the coffee table. sorry for teh blood and gore, i killed my interior decroatier for it, literally!"