Reviews for Wasting Time
JacobTwoTwo chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Ah, the joys of our current generation's procrastination. Actually it sucks, because you figure out at the end of the day that you did nothing. Very true indeed. I liked the repetition of the main line too.
GummiBear146 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
I love the repetitive, "So, I'm lying here, wasting time." It gives the poem a sense of wholeness, shall we say. It really wraps it into a neat little bow. I think that you are a really great writer, and you should continue to write. Instead of lying there, "wasting time." :]