Reviews for The Things I Would Not
Timescribe chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Ten years old? I'm astounded.
Jane Crxly chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
I'd read this poem (and liked it) a while back, but just now while flipping through your poems, I decided to read it again.

AAHHH! Could those simple words get much closer to what I'm going through right now? It's no longer surprising to me that you say how much you used to be like I am now!

"My foe is me, myself."

"I am still ungrateful,

Even though I'm freed."

Madelyn
Angela Nichole chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Very nice job! Keep writing :)

AngelaNichole
sara chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
I wish I was good too. :'(
Ganondorf The Dark Knight chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
I like how you quoted the scripture.