Reviews for Eternity
Poet Lordy chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Hi IR,

Does eternity have a face, a reflection... never thought of it before, it appears it does now, the sun sinking into a golden sea... couldn't have put it better myself. A beautiful colour onto something so deep and full of wonderment, almost endless like eternity, beautiful.

Silence within- silence without... Eternity, unfolded time, almost a blank tape waiting for that recording, very good.

To be part of time for such a short moment does have one wondering what you might miss, to be able to see and touch what is to happen.

But our hopeful eternity may lie somewhere else, there is a house that this may dwell, lets hope our acceptance to it will be warmly receievd, as I know this house may already be waiting.

That's our eternity.

Very nice IR.
Archia chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
The words all go together and seem so beautiful. I really like beauty like that.
reginavictoria chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
This one could use some more work... However you always seem to have a way of bringing the point home very effectively in the last two lines... which largely made up for the rest :)