Reviews for The Christmas Blues
Zack chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Fictionpress sucks. But I don't particularly care if I have to read this again; I really like it.

Hmm, so where was I? Oh yeah.

"You know, meetings."

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Ew.

His expression changed into that of disgust. "Don't touch me with that."

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Hah! My reaction exactly.

"On my leg? Why can't you sleep on my shoulder?"

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I probably wouldn't really care if you did. I'd just let you. Plus if I yelled at you or countered you you'd freeze up and probably cry.

"Fine, but if you drool on me, I'll kick your ass."

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Yeah! Damn, not on my pants!

It was just a little past five and the afternoon sun was proudly displaying that.

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And your parents aren't worried?

"Shh," he hushed, childishly holding a finger up to his lips, "it's a secret!"

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Dude, I TOTALLY do that.

"Sure," the sarcasm had returned, "Just point to the one you like!"

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Mr. Sarcasm and I are best friends.

"Damn right, you can hold it."

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I would probably give you an empty cup or something to use.

"Hm, a restroom? I could show you where it is, Darlin'."

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This asshole flirting with you? OH HELL NO, BRAH. ESTHER IS MINE.

"Hey," he called after me. "You got a name?"

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DIE, BITCH. I'LL KICK HIS ASS.

"What guy? Do I need to kick his ass?"

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OH YES I DO.

I knew where we were now; the tall buildings and the beautiful Lake Travis weren't the only giveaways

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YAY WE'RE IN AUSTIN! I LOVE AUSTIN. ITS MY HOMETOWN...(oops, I forgot to turn off caps lock. But I find it funny picturing myself yelling that so I'll just leave it...plus I'm too lazy to type it over again [though I wasn't lazy enough to type this whole hootenanny, so I guess I'm being extremely hypocritical here] so I guess I'll just leave it as it is...wow)

Before I knew it, I had my arms wrapped around Zack, squeezing the life out of him I'm sure.

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AWH.

He chuckled, "Could ya smile any bigger?"

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:D :D :D :D

IT WAS EVEN BETTER THE SECOND TIME AROUND! Man, how do you know me so well? Oh well...

LOVE, ZACK.

PS) Don't worry; I won't notify my friends that this story exists. Just for the sake of you and me. They'll probably separate us...HEY! This is like Romeo and Juliet!
SubwayWolf chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
YAY! I'm all tingling inside. I just can't wait. I half don't want to read this; I don't want to kill this mood. BUT I HAVE TO READ IT. Did I mention; YAY!

MERRY CHRISTMAS! :D – From Esther and Justina

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RIGHT BACK at you!

by looking at me, you'd think I was upset to be leaving the over-sized campus.

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Man, you ALWAYS stay after school! What is it with you and education?

(I keep trying to copy and paste these lines, but I end up failing because my hands are shaking; so excited!)

I was with Spring again.

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Cool name. Not as cool as Rivers, though (I think I already said this, lol)

if he asked you out, he's probably ready for a relationship.

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Hmm, GOOD POINT.

There was a friendly war between Orchestra and Band, each thinking that their group was superior to the other.

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TEAM BAND FTW.

it was clear that Band was more popular than Orchestra, Choir and Theater put together.

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Hey, I was in theatre!

I was informed that if someone were to walk the perimeter of the school, they would be walking one-and-a-quarter miles.

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Holy fudgecicle.

His blondish hair was brushed neatly and hung over, lightly grazing the frame of his glasses.

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Oh hey, that must be me!

I smiled as I took in that blue sweater hugging his torso.

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YUP THAT'S ME.

I cursed the cheap carpeting that did nothing to protect me from the pain

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HAHA YOU FELL. ... I mean... lemme help you up. heh heh.

He did, pulling his knees towards his chest and leaning back on his palms.

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WTF HOW DID YOU KNOW. I sit like that!

Reply calmly, "no."

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Heh, you would say no.

"Besides, he's my Zack, not yours."

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I most definitely belong to you.

"Hmm," I sighed, "He said your name was cool."

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I KNEW I said that! lmfao

It was ridiculous how happy this made her and she didn't even know him.

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Yup, I tend to do that. :D

"Well, in Wisconsin, when I left, it was about 9 degrees. I'd give anything for 20 degrees, 32 is a blessing."

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FUXING TRUE.