|Reviews for Holiday Kittens: Meaning of Christmas!|
| Honeybri chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Incredibly cute with all those kitties! Especially Dianna (pink with purple nose cute and her inability to say certain words). I loved the story about Jesus at the end.
There were a few mistakes/typos:
-"That's not frosting...its snow."
-"a small red shoe box and green string for rains" (reins)
-"Blackheart, Samel, and Chubs where the reindeer"
-"they all ran up the young brown haired boy" (ran up to)
-"Just that promise alone the kittens never left his side." (I'm not sure about this one; it doesn't sound right to me)
-"laid on their owners lap"
(This review counts for the December Review Marathon. For more information, you can go to the link in my profile)