Reviews for clash with moonphase
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
I think you overused the dash a bit here and making the whole thing one sentence seemed a bit run onish.

I really loved the third stanza. I thought the first three lines of that stanza were really beautiful. I also liked fourth stanza. Those were both really great descriptions.
YasuRan chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I am completely in love with the next-to-last stanza. It's just so unique and you have this wonderful way with descriptions and I've never heard anything like that before and...

Well, the list could go on for the entire poem XD

I love this. It's so inspiring.