Reviews for One More Drink
NearlyPrescient chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
really liked the the "You want to get a drink?" repetition as a framing device. I think it would still be a strong piece without it, but I think that really added to it. great work :]
ATCraiger chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
That was not what I was expecting when I started reading. But please, do take that as a compliment. What a wonderful description of a temptation that so many face, and then the overcoming of it. It's hard to put my thumb on the reason this story struck me, but I really enjoyed it, even though it's so short. Very nice.