Reviews for The Abomination
bellababystar13 chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
Ideas for The Vow:
-You can have Adele find disturbing information about the night she can't remember
-Caiden tells Adele about exactly what happened with his mom, Adele confronts Clark, and Clark gets mad
-Something happens to Adele's mom, or to Daniel (note: can be good or bad!)
dress chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Oh my, this was so cute I wanted to melt into a puddle of goo!
popsicle-stick26 chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
I know this was written a while ago but I just thought I'd let you know I loved it :) fluffy oneshots are the best! Haha
balloonfista chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
aw :)

loved it :)

cops are so hot
Number One Dancing Queen chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
I loved this one-shot:)
natmarie chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Nothing like a good fluffy one-shot to break up writer's block. Love it. Adorable and perfect. :) More Finely and Derrick? Please? Ice cream with a hot enforcer of the law on top? ;)
just-another-pretty-girl chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
It's so unbelievably cute!
Sweet-Teeth chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Awe this was adorable! Loved the ending .x
Steph chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
This is absolutely delicious! I actually clapped at the end :)
Soen22 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
I like fluff monsters :) they're a nice break every so often. But I loved this, it was super cute and it had great descriptions and it was just so cute :D

Again, you always choose the best names, Finley and Derrick
tickle.me.blue32 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
that was so cute! i actually squealed at the end, no kidding ;). you know, i don't really have a thing for men in uniform like some girls do, but i won't mind having someone like derrick for myself :D.

short stories like this one restore my love in one-shots :).

so yeah, i guess i don't need to say it again, but i really, really liked it :)
Entice chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
derek's hot. period.
renegade01 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
hot enforcer of the law...yep we'd all love one of those to be around to get us out of a parking ticket. fluffy and cute makes this enjoyable to read. ;)

i had an image of derrick placing the fine on finley's butt... i cracked myself up on that one. true story. excuse my illegal thoughts. ;)
Shewriteslove chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
that is adorable! and it made my morning1:D
lepster chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
I was AMAZING! i loved it. the characters were super cool. i always loved the way you can express things through... first person i think... idk but it always pulls me in and wraps me up in the story. your doing great work :)
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