|Reviews for But Is It Wrong?|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Interesting questions. The piece is very simple by way of writing, but what you ask is so deep that it really manifests itself in the reader. Great use of the poetic form.
On a writing level, the second line threw me a bit. Was it referring to the previous line or the next one? The rhythm was a bit jarred, too.
As for my take on the subject: morals are your own and there's no good and bad. The distinction comes with how you use them in the face of society.
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| TheShortStoryJournalist chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
This was very short and simple but deep in it's simplicity. Good work. )