Reviews for I want to be like you
TheSilverMirror chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
I read the summary of your poem first, and was kind of blown away by the eerie similarity between those words and something I had tweeted just the other day. ... Spring's a crazy season. Sometimes I forget. Humans are animals too.

I find your poem's tone and beat kind of mystical. It's totally awesome. I like how you started the poem especially, and that you use shape to make your poem resemble almost a stairway to heaven.
Ivy Climbroe chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
This is awesome but sadish! I LOVED IT THO i like the line 'make your mark among the stars'
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
That is amazing! The way the short lines help structure it to a fast pace is great! 'and seek your destiny' is may favourite line as it can have many meanings to different people! The use of 'you' and 'your' makes me feel like your speaking directly to me which I think makes the poem even more amazing! Brillant you are a genius!
SargentLooneyPencil chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
very true... )..