|Reviews for he took my poetry|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Interesting shift from the pronoun "her" to "my." Like the speaker saw him do this once before, yet still didn't have the foresight to stop it. That much is pretty literal, but there's so much more that branches out into. Amazing.
[he took her poetry
and wrapped himself] Great image.
[even though it was not warm
and it did not love him.] Hm. And a curious one. Again, this is really reaching at a lot of things.
[he became me, and I became him] So simple, yet so meaningful.
I think this is one of those times that words only skim the meaning they convey. There are so many emotions here that I can't even put words to. Simply beautiful.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)