Reviews for Once Upon A
radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
I like the way that your poem flowed. I hope to read more of your work!
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

omg omg omg

amazingness alert

I completion love this poem! everything it so effortlessly amazing and deep and completely exquisite

:D

my only suggestion is splitting it up into stanza's bc its its a long poem...but I still love it haha :)
Cecilia A chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I like the idea a lot, and it's very good for the most part. Don't use w/o, use the words. The flow is off a bit, and you can fix that esily by adding words in here and there. I enjoyed it, it's cute and heartfelt. :)

-Cecilie