Reviews for Black Ice
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
amazing rhymes

its very very deep but a little confusing towards the halfway point. Its kind of like you changed emotions and started typing anther poem there. It's a lovely poem together I just think its missing a couple of lines that tie it together.
her brown eyes chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Nice poem. Liked the last line.