Reviews for If You Can't Take the Heat
Ishotthealbatross chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Heart. Melting.
justanotherdot chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Okay. I love how they managed to make it work in the end. After readingthe story I literally went" aww". Thanks for the HFN. It's very lovely.
SneezingTurtle chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Oh my I loved this! I truly really did love this! And I teared up like a little shit when they were fighting. Perfect :)
ExPrincesssBrown chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Oh gosh. This was really sweet and adorable and ah. Thank you for writing this.
Greenpanda0u0 chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Awww so adorable... Thanks for writing something that actually is pretty realistic... I like how they both would not give up their dreams for each other... oh course it was nice that they ended up together too. \short and sweet. I like it!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Man that was so heartbreaking! But I loved it ;)
And I'm so glad things worked out in the end, thank god you didn't give them a depressing ending or something!
Sleeping Jay chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
I'm a melt of puddle goo. No, wait, is it goo of puddle melt? Melt puddle goo? Are those three the same thing? *is incoherent*

Love the realism, and really, just how much they love each other. The angst is just so real and not.. well, no offense to teenagers, but one has got to be fed up after a hundred or so insecure teenage angst. This story pulled at my heartstrings so. It really happens in real life, the torn-between-love-and-dream thing. And in real life, after spending who knows how many years working their ass off for it, people don't just drop their dream for their lover, even if it's the love-of-their-life. Usually, I think.

I love that you show the realism. And so glad that the opportunity dropped, and Ryan gave it to Dane. Much hearts to the guy. And now I'm rambling.

*goes back to incoherence*
ToBreakMyFall chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
: ) nice and fluffy !
Paige23 chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
So adorably cute, I love it, amazing job!
Clay Doll chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
All that comes to mind after reading this is ' D'aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww'

So yeah! It's fuggin adorable!
Sheryl chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Oh my gosh I don't normally read slash but OH MY GOSH THIS WAS JUST...AHHHH! It was sweet and funny and touching and beautifully written! And I love the fact that its slash so you don't get all that girl drama which is annoying!

This story was wonderful and amazing and everything a story should be! I less than three this to death!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
I love this. I looooooooove this. It's one of those one shots that I keep for safe keeping, because no matter how much time passes, I come back and still love it. Just enough fluff, combined with some eroticism, and a more realistic, less cliche setting where the character develop and have a base. I love love loooooove it, and would love to see more like it. Good work:)
Ibbit chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
This was a great story to end my night with. Frikkin lovely. I like the nicknames and the chemistry you put into the characters. Though, all the technical cooking talk kinda got me all ._. but that's life. We can't be good at everything :D Anyways, so this was great. Beautiful. Nothing wrong. Uhm. Maybe too short, but also just right? I give up criticing. Lovely. The End.

Luck with writings and lifes.

ImmanenceEnsured chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Lovely so lovely! I really like your characters, they're dramatic and sweet and the restaurant stuff is so nice to read. This made me quite happy.
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