Reviews for Coffee Shop
moongazer7 chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Wow... what an interesting story! I think this was a brilliant piece of work. I don't know if I like the idea of the staring but at least she was cautious and weary. I say this is a surprisingly simple but yet so complex masterpiece. You could really continue on and make an interesting story with her seeing people and the world as interesting and worth living fore! I also liked how casual the beginning was it seemed like a normal day and a somewhat boring story! however, bang and there it goes her world changes! I really like how the gentleman symbolizes hope and the world being a great place!

I am glad this story has some substance to it and is a bit longer. This is a good length! I came back to read stories yesterday and to be on this site again, and they were shorter pieces! I am happy to find a longer piece here!

Keep up the good work, and keep fanfictionpress. alive!