Reviews for Lucy
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
[The rainbow is imprinted

In the sole of her shoes] I love this image.

[But what is a name

When I can live it, breathe it?] Hm, interesting. Reminds me of the old line from Romeo and Juliet, but definitely a new take on it.

I really love the images of this. The way you personify, or at manipulate, the notion of color is quite interesting. I've always found the science behind the perception of light and color interesting (I'm hoping to become a lighting designer, actually), but you really take it to a new level.

The one thing I'd watch out for is that you're not becoming too repetitive. A lot of it is intentional and works well, but sometimes images or wording tends to be overused in a way I don't think you meant. I'd just read this over a few times to yourself with that in mind.

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Lucy chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I love you, too.