Reviews for one breakdown away from broken
Dominique Diane chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Pretty poem
baileyandthemonster chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
everything about this is just so damn beautiful, i almost can't believe it. i'm in love with this, really.
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
i love it. the "but i'm really i'm okay" contrasting with the "maybe i'm not okay." it's perfect. i love it.
allison23669 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
;) i like this, sometimes i wish i could just sit and think and have a tiny breakdown, too bad i cant. please read my story, The Seein, by this profile
laurenmlbc chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
I adore things like this...the arrangement of the poem and how it conveys more than just one aspect. So much fun, and you did a splendid job with this one!
iliads chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
really loved it, particularly how you fit the poem together so that you had "but really i'm okay" going down the left hand side. a lot of people attempt this but it often doesn't make sense as they have tried too hard to make it fit in with the poem. however, you did it perfectly. well done.
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
LOved it