Reviews for Prolonged GoodBye To Mr Sir
BookcraZzaY chapter 2 . 6/22/2011
it tells such a deep story and I no long poems are hard I don't think I ca imagine how hard a rhyme poem is to write...so greet job on that

I think you could work on flow and structure in this a little though

some of it is pure beautiful but there are those parts that really don't go. great job trying though...practice makes perfect and I can really see your see your sincere effort
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
amazing

deep

amazing

deep

and oh yeah...completely awesomely fantastic poem