Reviews for Everlong
checkyesdana chapter 4 . 1/8/2011
it always makes me so sad/frustrated when the characters act like that (

I just read all four chapters so far & I love it, very well written and enjoyable!
chng234 chapter 4 . 1/8/2011
this is so sad... they shld have a good talk
dakota s chapter 4 . 1/8/2011
surprisingly, i'm not upset with allie's reaction. sometimes i read things like that and am just 'wait, what? where the hell did that come from? stupid exaggeratedly emotional woman jumping to the wrong conclusions.' but that was believable. she would be emotional after the kiss she's been waiting for forever, and she would be insecure enough about leah to take that wrong. i think you did really good. i cant wait to read more
xoxtina46xox chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
This keeps getting better and better. I think Jason really needs to see what he has and not take it for granted. It's adorable how well allie gets along with his parents. i think the promotion will do them good. can't wait to read more!
xInkMusique chapter 3 . 1/5/2011
Heh, Margarita seems like fun xD I love her as the manipulative fairy godmother. Honestly, I'd really like Allie to go to Seattle anyway. I know Jordan is still confused about his feelings, but I don't like how he's trying to get her to give up the promotion, especially since he's been her best friend since forever (right?). I'm inferring that if you've known a person for that long, you'd want the best of for them, and if Jordan was more of the possessive/selfish type, then he wouldn't feel like such an ass, just a bit apologetic/guilty. But yay, I like how Allie is driven and is willing to start a fight by leaving. So I'm hoping for a long-distance relationship :D
Loonerisms chapter 3 . 1/5/2011
Ah, and so the plot thickens. Jeez, Margarita certainly knows how to manipulate (in the best possible way, of course). Y'know, usually I don't like 3rd person narratives but you really do pull it off and manage to keep the reader close to the characters. Love it!
PantheraDecay chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
So far so good.

I enjoy what you put into the characters.

They are ones you can relate to...

Can't wait for the update.
the-raven's-star chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
You're story AWESOME

I love the wy you're characters talk to each other, how they flow.

Snow Wolf Alpha chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
Characters are funny and I'm enjoying the ride I'm being taken on.

Now all she needs is a great guy.

Can't wait to read more.
Hearly chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
I'm just annoyed that you haven't wrote more. Haha I love it, your an awesome writer! It's weird though because I have a best friend called Jordan, and I like him but he has a girlfriend and shes seriously pretty and angelic, oh and my name starts with an 'A' so its kinda odd hahaha lol :) Cant wait til you put the next one up!
chng234 chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
finally it is jordan turn to taste the bitter medicine.. he better act fast b4 allie leave
ebliverpool chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
totally good! keep posting ASAP! :)
xoxtina46xox chapter 2 . 1/3/2011
This is such a great start! I literally get that feeling where your heart just drops, I feel for allie. I can't wait to read more, I really love this story so far. great job :)
Loonerisms chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Wow, another great chapter! Oh Leah Summers... I like how she's not mean... as far as we know quite yet. Oh I canot WAIT to see how this all turns out!
Myst C chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
ilike it ur story is really good so far...i feel so bad for allie it happened to me n my friend except backwards i was the oblivious didnt turn out well for us though and he moved away...i dont even know if i ever liked him i wonder bout if i did all the time... he was my best friend and now he n i go to the same high school and well i like him but he just seems like big flirt wit every girl... :( well im babbling but yeah good story love it cant wait for the next chappie
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