Reviews for Sweepers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like Blade's character |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha "My butt is still so sore!" "Did a Lumberjerk smack you too hard?" I cracked up so hard! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this already! Great chapter :) |
![]() ![]() This was a really good chapter. Very detailed. Makes me wonder if something similar happened to you, or you witnessed something such. I'm talking about the painting scene. I'm really engaged. Can't wait for your next chapter. Wonder how she's going to deal with Farah. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, just wanted to say keep up the good work! This is a ridiculously good story, I love your characterisation in particular. Looking forward to the update :D |
![]() ![]() i dont know if you 9gag but there's one meme there which goes "now kiss" and i BADLY want to do that to adelaide and luke so pleasseeee the tension i cannot evennn |
![]() ![]() ![]() write moreee XD LOL. i like. this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I'd almost forgotten about Kitty. Wait, Kitty is the one with the dad who left the house and stuff, right? I bet she herself felt like she lost her best friend to Luke, right when she needed Adelaide the most. And cool, I had a feeling that Sadie would have a boy (it's just the kind of plot twist to be expected). I wonder if Peter and Sadie will make up (speaking of which, who called him in the first place?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I love babies. Oliver's a cool name. I can definitely see Adelaide restrain herself when she finds out its a boy lol. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot even begin to tell you how much I love this. I love the plot, the characters, the easy-flowing style you write in - all of it! I can't wait for the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhhhhhhh yayyy nothing like a crisis to bring about some sisterly bonding. :) I'm glad they finally made up, sort of. I love Luke. I wish I knew Luke. That's the sign you've created someone lovely. I want to play board games with Luke and make bets. And this is an odd coincidence because I just got back from a night out with my very own sweeper. We played board games. We didn't play them with my parents in my house (we played them with my friends in the parking lot of Chick-fil-a), but who's checking on the details? Oh and when they didn't kiss I let out a very loud, very frustrated sigh. My dog glared at me for waking her up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Peters weird -.- something weirda gonna happen there I think lol I love it poor Kitty /: they almost kissed! Update soon love I love it! |
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![]() ![]() guuuuurl you are killin me here why her house why not his i wanna know more bout LuLu bud maybe you wanna tell us even just a lil bout him |