Reviews for Sweepers
the vcg chapter 28 . 2/18/2012
I really like Blade's character
Aurora Clarte chapter 3 . 2/18/2012
Hahaha "My butt is still so sore!" "Did a Lumberjerk smack you too hard?" I cracked up so hard!
Aurora Clarte chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
I love this already! Great chapter :)
Anon chapter 28 . 2/18/2012
This was a really good chapter. Very detailed. Makes me wonder if something similar happened to you, or you witnessed something such. I'm talking about the painting scene. I'm really engaged. Can't wait for your next chapter. Wonder how she's going to deal with Farah.
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 27 . 2/13/2012
update soon.
YellowBanana chapter 27 . 2/13/2012
Hello, just wanted to say keep up the good work! This is a ridiculously good story, I love your characterisation in particular. Looking forward to the update :D
jo chapter 27 . 2/12/2012
i dont know if you 9gag but there's one meme there which goes "now kiss" and i BADLY want to do that to adelaide and luke so pleasseeee

the tension i cannot evennn
seasalt24 chapter 27 . 2/12/2012
write moreee XD LOL. i like. this story.
silverspigot chapter 27 . 2/12/2012
You know, I'd almost forgotten about Kitty. Wait, Kitty is the one with the dad who left the house and stuff, right? I bet she herself felt like she lost her best friend to Luke, right when she needed Adelaide the most. And cool, I had a feeling that Sadie would have a boy (it's just the kind of plot twist to be expected). I wonder if Peter and Sadie will make up (speaking of which, who called him in the first place?)
renegade01 chapter 27 . 2/12/2012
Aww, I love babies. Oliver's a cool name. I can definitely see Adelaide restrain herself when she finds out its a boy lol. ;)
Carmel March chapter 27 . 2/12/2012
I cannot even begin to tell you how much I love this. I love the plot, the characters, the easy-flowing style you write in - all of it! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Fedorable chapter 27 . 2/11/2012
Ahhhhhhhhh yayyy nothing like a crisis to bring about some sisterly bonding. :) I'm glad they finally made up, sort of.

I love Luke. I wish I knew Luke. That's the sign you've created someone lovely. I want to play board games with Luke and make bets.

And this is an odd coincidence because I just got back from a night out with my very own sweeper. We played board games. We didn't play them with my parents in my house (we played them with my friends in the parking lot of Chick-fil-a), but who's checking on the details?

Oh and when they didn't kiss I let out a very loud, very frustrated sigh. My dog glared at me for waking her up.
Viva-la-Mylo chapter 27 . 2/11/2012
Peters weird -.- something weirda gonna happen there I think lol I love it poor Kitty /: they almost kissed! Update soon love I love it!
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 26 . 2/8/2012
update soon.
jo chapter 26 . 2/5/2012
guuuuurl you are killin me here why her house why not his

i wanna know more bout LuLu bud maybe you wanna tell us even just a lil bout him
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