next chapter please.

I have to say this has been a very, very, very, very, very, very (okay, I'll stop with the "very"s.) interesting story.

And let me guess, there were strawberries on the cake.

Aww! Poor Luke! I think he had an allergic reaction...Is that what happened? And poor Sadie! Her husband seems like a creeper. I don't like him. Seriously, what's wrong with him, besides his possessiveness and creepy looks...

PLEASE update soon!

He's allergic to nuts?

I just love how you mentioned AP Calc at the beginning of the chapter. It reminded me of my test tomorrow. :)

Anyway...goodness you never fail to impress me with your cliffhangers. I'm not sure if I should be admiring or fuming. My hypothesis is the cake. Hope you update soon!

Oh my gawd! He had an allergy? Who'd have thought? Well, at least it acted up at the right time :D

I'm not sure _what_ Adelaide was about to do.. (neither was she, if you ask me :D )

One word. AWESOME.

OH.. And one more thing.. I think I'm in love with Luke Sawyer xD

Aaaahhh you updated!

I must say I'm very intrigued with Luke. I can't wait until we find out more about him. I like all of your characters, actually. They're very complex and I like that everyone has their own past, present, and future.

I look forward to your next update!

I love reading a scene with Luke and Adelaide in it. The other characters are great too, but your main ones are just fun to read about. Can't wait for more. ;)

Another great chapter! Good luck and update soonie~

update more please.

So I am guessing Quang is gay and has a thing for Luke. Addie's character is hillarious especially her interactions with her family. I'm looking forward to see how it all plays out.

I love this story. I'm so glad you're continuing it. :)It's so original and I love your writing style. YOu create amazing mental pictures, it's almost like a movie playing out in my mind. Please keep going!

So, I read this when you originally posted it. And when I saw that you were re-posting, I kept waiting to read (not sure why) so I've just read through all 20 chapters today. It's even better than I remember it and Luke is definitely growing on me. I wish that she had been sober enough to realize that he was able to carry her...i.e. she's not fat. But I was shaking my head from the time she said yes to playing the drinking game, to the time she called Luke, LuLu. But I am glad that she didn't spill her love for Quang to him. Her impending hang-over will be enough to regret once the next morning comes. Plus, I'm sure that if her dad finds out, she'll never hear the end of it. With booze, you loose! Haha...loved that!