love the chapter,update more please.

wow. that was amazing. aha.

i did think adelaide wearing a sweater was pretty funny. at least it wasn't a costume party. imagine her coming to a costume party in a sweater and jeans. lol.

quang is definitely different. i like how you made him asian. asian pride ftw.

(okay. that was just awkward.)

so yeah. awesome chapter as always!

and i really liked the end scene with luke and everything.

i hope they get together soon(:

bella.

Awww. Poor Adelaide. :[ Teenagers can be so stupid sometimes. And Quang is such a jerk...

But, at least Luke came to the rescue~! :D and hopefully, Adelaide will survive the next chapter and not face her parents' wrath? maybe?

Keep writing ~ :P

The evils of peer pressure. I hope she realises Quang is a prick. ;)

the end gave me the feeling she was dying, haha.

I guess I've read too many 'think further' books D If you know what I mean.

Anyway; Adelaide was a silly girl in this chapter, though I loved the concerned LuLu!

Peer pressure can do a lot to you.

keep up the good work!

*Aletta

What. An. Idiot. Honestly? Why are some teens so stupid

love,love,love!update please.

Favorite line of the day:

"Then he's totally going to go." ! LOL. No, seriously, I am.

I'm constantly thinking about Adelaide and Luke. Oh god. I'm fangirling so hard. I LOVE THIS! X3

okay. so i sorta promised a longer review last time .. so here goes.

the yoga session was hilarious! and also the part when luke catches adelaide doing those pelvic "tilts" .

the fight w/lilia was sort of sad ... something about lilia's reaction to adelaide wanting to lose wait made me think that maybe lilia also went through some stuff to become 'perfect.'

also, i can't wait to see what luke has in store for the halloween party(;

"His idea of fun involves blackmailing innocent girls."

i LOVEDLOVEDLOVED that line. aha.

yeah. i'm just being awkward now. can't wait for the next update!

bella

Awesome chapter. The yoga session made me grin. ;)

Update! I love Adelaide she's cool :)

Good chapter! Very interesting, and sorry I haven't been reviewing, I've been soooo busy, but, I got to finish your other chapters and they were awesome! I've seen little mistakes, but overall this is a very good story and I look forward to reading more.

Adelaide sure is cautious about any friendship she may develop with Luke. Its a good job Luke's persistent. Can't wait for more. ;)

I'm loving the story so far! Can't wait to read more!

P.S. ~ I may have to add "sweeper" to my vocab _