At least she got to confide in her sister :)

Oh, I love the start to this story :)

First of all, I love Adelaide's character. Ha ha, she's exactly how I am when I've had a bad day! Fortunately, I've never worked at a restaurant, but I did work at McDonalds for a year-which was wayy worse. I would've totally chased after that guy all the way down the street to get my revenge!

Can't wait to read more :)

"When she was angry, she held onto it like a baby monkey to its momma." that just caught my attention, really funny way to describe it xD and i'm still enjoying the story, but is it just me or is it funny AND bitter-sweet?

. "I guess you could say that. You know how we met? He crashed into me." im a previous chapter you wrote that kitty was the first to know about her shitty day and abot her being run into and giving him a rant, but here it seems like she heard about it for the first time? just thought i'd point it out. i'm really enjoying this story, it's really funny D

shit! "Did you flush one of those feminine napkin things down the toilet? It's plugged." that made me laugh till i almost cried xD just so embarassing and awful! i've gotta say i HATE luke though, ok, be a jerk..but you just can't steal someone else's table!

oh god. I love this story. I like Adelaide a lot. :)

update soon

This is fantastic! Really well written too! I can't wait for more chapters and I seriously don't know why you don't have more reviews. You deserve them.

"This isn't good," he muttered.

Relieved that the silence was broken, I said, "What isn't?"

"My tutor thinks I'm hot."

"I do not."

"You do."

I thought that part was hilarious, I also liked the part we're she called him charming! Eek this is getting so good, can't wait till their first kiss! :)

This is a great story. There are grammatical errors, but it's not enough to take away from the story. Great job! Please keep writing on a regular basis and finish this story because it deserves that (and I'm fairly impatient :)).

well i think they're both charming. in a too-cute-just-get-together-already way. ;)

great chapter update more please

You must have a great sense of humor, because this story makes me laugh every few minutes when I'm reading it! I like the banter between Luke and Adelaide; they're hilarious. Luke is such an enigma, though! What exactly is he planning...hmm.

And although I haven't worked at a diner before, I have worked at a restaurant. It makes reading Adelaide's work scenes even funnier, since I completely understand her frustration!

This chapter was amazing. You really have a way with sarcasm and you have perfect comedic timing. It's great. I laughed out loud. Update soon!

update update update

Haha,

this chapter was too good to be true D

I laughed really loud at this D

"We're going to jail,"

He should've listened ;P