Reviews for Sweepers
toshi chapter 12 . 4/16/2011
well well well ... i havent read the story yet i skipped to end but the from the last line i know it going to be good. now add about four to five chapters and let it be but well done now its time for me to read. when i am done i will be surfe to comment on the story again oncce good job
renegade01 chapter 9 . 4/7/2011
their insults never fail to make me grin, especially the rollercoaster one. great stuff. ;)
oxBlueEyes15xo chapter 9 . 4/6/2011
MORE MORE MORE! I'm really enjoying this, can't wait to read more of this great story!
YankeeSamson chapter 9 . 4/6/2011
That was very cruel of Luke to do that.

Great chapter!

Update soon!
Havok Hotline chapter 8 . 4/3/2011
Ello :)

Finally! We get a brilliant chapter!
renegade01 chapter 7 . 3/13/2011
seeing them trying to outdo each other made me grin. ;)
CONVERSEically Obsessed chapter 7 . 3/13/2011
Nice!
YankeeSamson chapter 7 . 3/12/2011
Multiple drinks was hilarious. Best part in this story actually.

Update soon!
reindrops chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Okay, this seems interesting.
YankeeSamson chapter 6 . 3/9/2011
Last chapter well I think it was the last chapter, where Adelaide gushed over math, I was laughing. Because I hate math. With a burning passion. And if I didnt know better I think your making fun of it but I dont know. I hate math but I love her enthusiasm for it.

And loved how she brushed off...Luke? Is that his name? The thing about Karma was a good combat.

Love the story so far. Update soon!
lyop chapter 5 . 3/5/2011
I never read the story before you took it down, but I'm really enjoying it now. I like the way you have nice, long chapters. )
renegade01 chapter 5 . 3/5/2011
i want more already. ;)

love their interaction...again. they make me laugh.
renegade01 chapter 4 . 3/4/2011
i like how this is progressing. addie's thoughts make me grin. ;)
sydney420 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I really enjoyed this. It was entertaining and well written. It wasn't like a typical romance, all cheery and fluff. I hope you continue!
bright city lights chapter 2 . 2/17/2011
aw! ever since i saw this on SKoW and ADoR, i've been wanting to read it, but you've been editing. I'm glad I waited - it's really good and I'm super excited to read more :)
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