Reviews for Sweepers
Rilan Morr chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Larry and Tim are so annoying. I honestly don't know how Adelaide - or any of the other waitresses - deal with those two guys. I don't know if I'd be able to work with people as annoying as those two.

Ha. Anyway, I liked this first chapter. And how Adelaide ran after the guy and demanded for an apology. Although I do feel bad that she only did it because one, she wasn't have a good day and two, he sorta ruined her uniform.

Can't wait for the update :)
Miss.Smiles2Much chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Sounds intriguing, I hope you update soon so I can keep reading!
ohspastic chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
YAY! Now off to reading.
alfers chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Woot. :) I've missed this story. I really was getting into it before you stopped updating to look into publishing. I'm happy to see you plan on starting it again. :D Looking forward to the next chapter. ;)
renegade01 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
great first chapter. their interaction made me grin. ;)
Hoshiko the Loveless chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Oh, I remember this story! Gosh, I can't wait! ]
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