Reviews for Sweepers
eminemluvr chapter 35 . 7/20/2012
The perfect ending!(: I'm actually crying because it's over. I love it!3
the aspiring cynic chapter 35 . 7/19/2012
This story was just as good the second time around! I can't wait to read the sequel for it!
Carmel March chapter 35 . 7/19/2012
Wow, amazing, amazing ending. Cute and romantic and just perfect. I will be looking forward to the sequel! :)
AlanisBRAVO chapter 35 . 7/18/2012
Such a wonderful story! Good job!(: 3 LA infinity 3 that was very cute a very great ending as well :D
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 35 . 7/18/2012
awesome awesome story!
Guest chapter 35 . 7/17/2012
I can't believe it's truly here. And seriously I'm not crying, just got something in my eye. That's all. The ending was just perfect for this story. Can't wait for the sequel, and will be checking out your new story Just What I Needed when you post it!
yourcrookedneighbor chapter 35 . 7/17/2012
Oh, no, it's over! I have to say, I loved this story so, so much. Addie and Luke's relationship was so real and fresh and just an overall joy to indulge in. But a sequel? That gives me chills! So, it's not technically over, thank God, and I have something to look forward to in 2013. Plus, I'm also crazy excited about your new story! Literally. Cannot. Wait.

Basically, you are an amazing author. Whatever you're doing, you're doing it right and I just love you so much. You're cooler than the underside of a pillow. Much love.

AMessofPickles chapter 35 . 7/17/2012
OH MY GOSH THIS IS SO EXCITING. There's something very satisfying in beginning a story in the beginning and watching it develop with time, and I'm excited to do that with your future stories.
This was a fabulous story. I loved every minute of it, and I really liked the ending. I liked how things were not sort of 'Happily Ever After' and how there was a lot of doubts mixed in with the unknown. Because that's exactly how life is. And plus it completely goes with the whole Sweeper v.s Keeper thing :)

Anyways, great job and I will be sure to keep you on Author alert :D I look forward to your new stories! Great ending again. Adelaide and Luke are the best
renegade01 chapter 35 . 7/17/2012
Aww, loved it. Well done you. Great ending. ;)
flunkybubbleshorts chapter 35 . 7/17/2012
Fictionpress has been acting funny... so I couldn't review the last chapter. Great going! The end was done very well. I'm so glad I read this story from somewhere close to the beginning :)
Can't wait for more!
InsanityAndBeyond chapter 35 . 7/17/2012
aaahhhhhhh! ITS FINISHED!
wow, I really loved this story, the characters, the way you built the relationships, just everything fit so perfectly, and the ending was great.
Wow, so now what shall I do? Twiddle my thumbs and wait for your next story I guess.
All I have left to say is thankyou for sharing such an amazing story.
SimplyDevine chapter 35 . 7/17/2012
I just can't believe it is over...I swear I feel like I'm going to cry (

But honestly this is one of the better written, most original stories on fictionpress that I have read. The character's are amazing, the plot fun and enticing...It's one of those that totally get reread about a million times D

I cannot wait for the sequal nor your new story...I will be reading both!
Nephythys chapter 35 . 7/17/2012
That. Was. The cutest ending ever!

And I'm the one who hates mushiness. But this was really...(can't believe i'm saying it) adorable. :)

Keep writing! I loved Luke and Adelaide. I still love them !
tale chapter 35 . 7/17/2012
I'm kinda sad that I didn't have the opportunity to feel the anticipation of waiting for each chapter to come out, since I discovered this story late, but there's Keepers and I can hardly wait! :)

The epilogue was sweet, but I don't have much to say about it since pretty much all the loose ends were tied up! So I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. :)
noriepie chapter 35 . 7/17/2012
I feel like i've been reading this story forever.
Not because it's a bad thing or the updates have been slow, nothing like that, but because I remember the story even when I'm not reading it :).

I'd like a sweeper that's a keeper, that's for sure.

Gimme a Luke!
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