Reviews for Sweepers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! I NEED TO READ THE EPILOGUE NOW! haha. This story is absolutely amazing and I am so captivated by it! Please post it soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lilia is such an idiot. Omg her driving. . . I have no words! haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW really entertaining story! I just feel bad about myself with the math now haha. I struggled in it but man these two are pretty much obsessed! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was perfection. Really, just perfection. Ahhh, I am still sort of speechless over this. I am looking forward to the epilogue to see how things will be wrapped up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! update fast please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...about time! That's all I can say. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY! ahahaha 3 |
![]() ![]() OH MY BELIZZLES YESS! ADELUKE. OR ADELULU! Whatever. As you can see, I am a HUGE fan of this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww so sweet sweep worthy! |
![]() ![]() This was a phenomenal story. It was so beautiful that I actually can't find the words to describe. Excuse me while I go cry on my bed for its ending. Loved it. Loved it so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I shouldn't have read this while eating because I just had about fifty near-death choking experiences. I'll start off by saying AAAAAAH FINALLY! I liked the callback to the first chapter. It made me grin. And finally, Adelaide deserves a loud "You go girl!" for getting out there and taking risks. |
![]() ![]() I absolutely ADORED it. REALLY. I can't believe there's only one chapter left :'( What I really love the most about this fic is that it's SO innocent and SO sweet. It's not about those cliched teenage dramas with all the backstabbing and the lies, etc. It's not about sex, drugs, and alcohol. It's so, so...Unique. I loved the scene after the "I love you's." Of COURSE they would make a math analogy. LOL. Can't wait for that epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, you wrote this entire ending perfectly. Gah, I can't even describe how much I love this story. A week ago I finished the entire story, in practically one sitting, and I've loved every minute of it. All the characters are fantastic from Lou, to all the other waitresses, to Ad's relationship with her sisters. It's just so beautifully written, and I loved watching Adelaide grow and change. It's just been fabulous. Favorite lines: Same biting wit, same stubbornness, same affection. And I still loved him just the same. I couldn't hang on to the anger. So I let the rest of it go. I think the sentence below just shows how much she's matured. Slow and tender, just like I'd always wanted. Total sweeper behavior, but for once I didn't focus on sweeper-this or sweeper-that. Because although he wasn't perfect, and I certainly wasn't either, everything about this moment was. That's really all I could ask for. Ah, this was so good. I'm very sad to see this story end, but it's been a fantastic read. ...my heart hopscotching as I repeated them in my head... Love this phrase so much :) Can't wait for the epilogue. This has just been a wonderful story! I look forward to other stories by you! :D |
![]() ![]() OMG, when I first saw this update I was thinking 'oh no, someone else plagiarized another AMAZING author'. But no, same person, different username. Keep writing because you're amazing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahhhhh, I'm all giddy and happy ! tehehehehehehe WOOOOO ! okay, now that I have cooled down a bit, I would like to say thank you for updating and you have done an amazing job on the story. I hope the epilogue would be just as great (which I'm pretty sure it would be) and ... yeah :) thanks for everything ! :D |