Reviews for Sweepers
danadelro chapter 34 . 7/15/2012
OH MY GOD! I NEED TO READ THE EPILOGUE NOW! haha. This story is absolutely amazing and I am so captivated by it! Please post it soon! :D
danadelro chapter 14 . 7/14/2012
Lilia is such an idiot. Omg her driving. . . I have no words! haha
danadelro chapter 4 . 7/14/2012
WOW really entertaining story! I just feel bad about myself with the math now haha. I struggled in it but man these two are pretty much obsessed! :D
Carmel March chapter 34 . 7/12/2012
That was perfection. Really, just perfection. Ahhh, I am still sort of speechless over this. I am looking forward to the epilogue to see how things will be wrapped up!
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 34 . 7/10/2012
yay! update fast please.
funnechick chapter 34 . 7/10/2012
Wow...about time! That's all I can say. :)
Me102 chapter 34 . 7/10/2012
FINALLY! ahahaha 3
Guest chapter 34 . 7/10/2012

As you can see, I am a HUGE fan of this chapter.
noriepie chapter 34 . 7/10/2012
Awww so sweet sweep worthy!
Guest chapter 34 . 7/9/2012
This was a phenomenal story. It was so beautiful that I actually can't find the words to describe.

Excuse me while I go cry on my bed for its ending.
Loved it. Loved it so much.
Fedorable chapter 34 . 7/9/2012
I shouldn't have read this while eating because I just had about fifty near-death choking experiences.

I'll start off by saying AAAAAAH FINALLY! I liked the callback to the first chapter. It made me grin.

And finally, Adelaide deserves a loud "You go girl!" for getting out there and taking risks.
Guest chapter 34 . 7/9/2012
I absolutely ADORED it. REALLY. I can't believe there's only one chapter left :'(

What I really love the most about this fic is that it's SO innocent and SO sweet. It's not about those cliched teenage dramas with all the backstabbing and the lies, etc. It's not about sex, drugs, and alcohol. It's so, so...Unique.

I loved the scene after the "I love you's." Of COURSE they would make a math analogy. LOL. Can't wait for that epilogue.
AMessofPickles chapter 34 . 7/9/2012
Oh man, you wrote this entire ending perfectly. Gah, I can't even describe how much I love this story. A week ago I finished the entire story, in practically one sitting, and I've loved every minute of it. All the characters are fantastic from Lou, to all the other waitresses, to Ad's relationship with her sisters.
It's just so beautifully written, and I loved watching Adelaide grow and change. It's just been fabulous.

Favorite lines:
Same biting wit, same stubbornness, same affection. And I still loved him just the same.

I couldn't hang on to the anger. So I let the rest of it go.
I think the sentence below just shows how much she's matured.

Slow and tender, just like I'd always wanted. Total sweeper behavior, but for once I didn't focus on sweeper-this or sweeper-that. Because although he wasn't perfect, and I certainly wasn't either, everything about this moment was. That's really all I could ask for.

Ah, this was so good. I'm very sad to see this story end, but it's been a fantastic read. heart hopscotching as I repeated them in my head...

Love this phrase so much :)

Can't wait for the epilogue. This has just been a wonderful story! I look forward to other stories by you! :D
Jane chapter 34 . 7/9/2012
OMG, when I first saw this update I was thinking 'oh no, someone else plagiarized another AMAZING author'. But no, same person, different username. Keep writing because you're amazing :)
Zippy Gonzalez chapter 34 . 7/9/2012
ahhhhh, I'm all giddy and happy ! tehehehehehehe WOOOOO !
okay, now that I have cooled down a bit, I would like to say thank you for updating and you have done an amazing job on the story. I hope the epilogue would be just as great (which I'm pretty sure it would be) and ... yeah :) thanks for everything ! :D
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