Reviews for Sweepers
Anime Misstery chapter 32 . 3/19/2012
Amazingly written chapter as usual. I like the way you zoom into the details just the right amount without going over the top. I love your writing style. Keep up the awesomness and update soonie~
oxBlueEyes15xo chapter 32 . 3/19/2012
Eek! I hope this doesn't back fire on her! Can't wat for the next chapter. I loved how grown up and mature Adelaide was in this chapter, and how she made the decision to end things with Qang. It makes her my fav protagonist in a long long time, you've really shown her evolve throughout this whole story, and I love that. Until next time!
mylittleprincess chapter 32 . 3/19/2012
update fast please.
Guest chapter 32 . 3/18/2012
Please please please update soon! You've left it on another cliffhanger. I'm dying for Luke and Adrianne to just get it on already!
Joey chapter 32 . 3/18/2012
All these Luke-less chapters have been killing me! Hope to God he doesn't act like a total douche when Addie visits him:(
Bri chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
I love this! Very original beginning, It pulled me right in!
Viva-la-Mylo chapter 32 . 3/18/2012
That was a disaster o: shes gonna see luke!:DDD UPDATE SOON P!EAASEEE
silverspigot chapter 32 . 3/18/2012
Sadie wearing a pink dress and blue eyeshadow. Holy cow, I can't imagine anyone willingly wearing that unless they purposely wanted to clash, or they were going to a Kesha concert or something. That just makes me like Sadie a bit more :D And Addie...oh dear, I just wish there was a picture of the way she looked somewhere, just so I could have a clearer image of her in my head. Quang seems kind of...off. I guess I just don't like him. Addie is awesome, as usual, and I really liked it when she elbowed (Punched? Headbutted?) Farah in the nose. I bet she's going to end up at either Luke's house, or Lou's diner. It would make more sense if she went to Luke's place, since she mostly likely knows the diner's address. Woo hoo! Let's hope that Luke forgives her and they get along again :)
flunkybubbleshorts chapter 32 . 3/18/2012
Yay! That was a great chapter. So much happened and there's so much more to come! :D :D Can't wait!
silverspigot chapter 31 . 3/14/2012
I'm unbelievably happy to finally know that the Kitty situation is under control. But seriously, it must be awful to have to deal with a situation where your mom is breaking down, and I guess you can't help but break down with her. I'd like to make some guesses about why Luke was all angry, but I don't want to end up making a fool out myself, at least, more than necessary. And you know what's funny? I never actually knew that Adelaide was Asian. Maybe it was mentioned and I forgot, but it was an interesting little tidbit. And are Peter and Sadie going to end up divorced? He always did seem a little creepy, so it was a little fitting that he was the only one in love in the relationship, even though he would be extremely hurt if he found out, just like anyone else
noriepie chapter 31 . 3/13/2012
AW i couldn't help but know that her and luke have a big misunderstanding and it sucks that they are both so oblivious to it. I'm very sad about Sadie's story too, I didn't think I could like her, but I do.
funnechick chapter 31 . 3/13/2012
Wow...it seems like everyone has been put through the ringer lately. Hopefully things will be looking up soon.
the aspiring cynic chapter 31 . 3/12/2012
Dress shopping sounded horrible. I've always hated dresses and shopping for that matter so I can totally relate.

Mandy's secret was so heartbreaking, but I made me realize how awesome Addie's sisters are.

Maybe things are looking up if Addie's finally back with her partner in crime Kitty. Let's just hope for the best.

Can't wait til the next chapter!
HungerInHerEyes chapter 31 . 3/12/2012
Great story, hope you update soon :)
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 31 . 3/12/2012
update update update
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