Reviews for Paper Crane
puppymobile chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Beautiful, as ever.
the sun softly smiles chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
this is gorgeous. I love the phrase "slept against your wrist."
Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Wow, I am absolutely speechless. Every line is brilliant and I think the last stanza has to be the best one. This poem is full to the brim with emotion and so descriptive that you can see the paper crane being made over and over again. I really can't think of any constructive criticism.

Great poem and keep writing.
happydays chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I enjoyed this poem very much, it's seriously the first time I've ever seen anyone write an autobiography of a paper crane :) The paper crane kind of comes alive in your poem.