Reviews for False Advertising
Beethoven chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
That was genius! I loved it start to finish and your writing style made it so crisp and clear start to finish. It broke my heart and made me sigh about a million times. Write more? Oh, and not giving the characters names was so good. I didn't even notice until I was trying to tell my sister about your story. Good work!
velefried chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Such a sad story. It nearly brought me to tears. I love how your writing style takes this heavy, depressing situation and makes it feel like it's a normal daily routine, which of course, gives more insight into the characters and their struggles.
Random chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
I enjoyed this, it works... Ah I'm bad at leaving reviews but I wanted to do it for this story n_n;
hamstergirl237 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
This is amazing. And I just looked at your profile, and I can't believe you're fourteen, because this is so much better than what I could write. Not that I'm that much older than you... It could be possibly because I am incredibly immature.

(And, on actual reviewing, all I can say is that you had me hooked by the fourth paragraph because I am such a classical music geek.) See ya. :)
Jodiexxx chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Keep the good work up? :)


ps. I don't think I ever did find out the name of the two brothers. :O
Bleed The Dream chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
I honestly loved this. Your style, the way it's so simple. I realized that the MC's don't even have a name! And the blunt way you describe things really give the story an atmosphere that works. I also adored the musical metaphors.