This is so sad! I don't want the magic in the sky to die!

i rather like the contradiction in the first line.

i love the harsh ending of the second stanza.

short, yet thought-provoking. this packs a lot of emotion and strong diction into few lines.

YOUR POEMS are what's surreal. The feeling I get when I read them is ethereal; sometimes I feel like they're sprinkled with fairy dust. It really draws me in and my curiosity is piqued. Why is the sun brutal?

MUCH LOVElovelovelove.

p.s. would you be so kind as to answer my last question? Genuinely interested :D

I really enjoyed this.

I loved the imagery of the 'white scars' 'scratching their way across' the sky. It's beautiful.

Keep writing!